Monday, 2 March 2015

Yr3 Week 19 (Mon 2 Mar - MDA3400 Screenwriting workshop 8)

Today´s session was another very slim one, with only two people attending, so it was opted to do another tutorial, this time with James. I presented to him the latest draft, though this was more a revised version of 4 from the past workshop as it was, by and large, the same just with some scene and dialogue alterations as per David Cottis' recommendations.

Reception was actually really positive, with the changes felt to finally be giving the piece a sense of unity and Bobo finally having a strong enough prescence in the story to justify himself. Really, all that was left was just more dialogue clean ups to make some lines less overt.

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